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Critiques
The shading is beautiful, I love your soft shading. The detail in the face and especially the sticker... bandage thing on his cheek. Wonderful detail! <3
I would suggest a few more flat shapes in there, however - the image is a bit too texture heavy and the repitition of the patterns on the wall, wings and hair doesn't really help. It's important to separate a character from their background - especially if you've already started to do it using shadows.
The type of adjustment layer you've used for the pattern on the background has added some unflattering colour noise; some more of that lovely tangerine by Ritsuko's left shoulder works well next to the magenta of his hair and wings - or perhaps even a lighter tuquiose to complement his top... The texture on the eyes is a bit of overkill.
It's a nice pose though! His arm might be a little thick, though, and watch the angle of the head - you've turned it a little more than 180 degrees, which starts making things look a little odd - especially twisting his shoulders so much the opposite way.
The petals to the top left are a fantastic touch, and hell, you've made the fairy brush WORK XD
Awesomesauce. Bring us more?!
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